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SDN's avatar

The guy Lom's talking to is interesting too. Most people wouldn't be thinking that far ahead, they'd just be glad the bums are gone.

Frank Nero's avatar

So Lom returns! Very good news for the day.

It’s nicely set. Agree with SDN and the office evokes just the right feel. Good start.

More, please!

Alice's avatar

I like this! Set in gritty reality (my preference), and with a mystery or two to follow up.

George Phillies's avatar

So far, so well done. More commonly, when a predator finishes eating out a district, it moves on.