A snippet from a work in progress
The guy Lom's talking to is interesting too. Most people wouldn't be thinking that far ahead, they'd just be glad the bums are gone.
So Lom returns! Very good news for the day.
It’s nicely set. Agree with SDN and the office evokes just the right feel. Good start.
More, please!
I like this! Set in gritty reality (my preference), and with a mystery or two to follow up.
So far, so well done. More commonly, when a predator finishes eating out a district, it moves on.
Indeed.
The guy Lom's talking to is interesting too. Most people wouldn't be thinking that far ahead, they'd just be glad the bums are gone.
So Lom returns! Very good news for the day.
It’s nicely set. Agree with SDN and the office evokes just the right feel. Good start.
More, please!
I like this! Set in gritty reality (my preference), and with a mystery or two to follow up.
So far, so well done. More commonly, when a predator finishes eating out a district, it moves on.
Indeed.