This wound up being a long chapter. I think I figured out what was slowing me down, and had a conversation with Sanford about the scenario I’m setting up. I’m going to focus more on the story in front of me, and worry less about the overarching series plot. That should help. I’m a pantser for a reason!
Oh, right, the results of the poll on the series title!
Ordering Chaos won the popular vote. However, there were some brilliant reader suggestions, including Rick T.’s “Timeless Shaft” which amused both Sanford and I and it really does sum up what’s going on in the series. Sanford then also suggested “Bohica” but while that also sums it up (so much!) I think we’re going to use Rick’s title. Thank you Rick! Ping me after publication for a signed copy of the book!